Is this normal? When I was in Ehlly vs. Eddy fight, When I choose the "Get back on my feet" dialogue option, it says "an exception has occurred" for some reason.
I just finished it. It's so amazing I love the characters almond, ikaris, zaddy rodrick I love this visual novel it deserves the love and support it gets and I hope this visual novel still gets update. Don't try to stress yourself🫶🫰🪷
Am I the only one that can't stand the Princess Dhalia that narcissist, stuck-up, elitist, self-centered, arrogant, umpleasant bitch? Not that her maid is much better if we're being honest... To be honest if they "disappeared" from the VN I would be happier not having to deal with them.
There's a bug where Ehlly almost win the fight. Can't proceed to the next part unless he lose. Other than can't start from the last save file, everything's fine. I love this VN so I'll keep supporting this
You know for some reason I thought two of the guys had their routes starting I didn't think it was only the second guy so far anyway I have no problem it's just I was hoping to see what the black wolf would do with the main character on their first day together on top of that the second guy really give me whiplash because I don't remember the main character ever fully acting like that at all sorry for the long comment
OMG OMG OMG I so excited for the next update it. I'm literally going to die if it doesn't get an update just finished the storyline so I was just waiting for the update. (~'v'~)
Everytime i try download it says that it intafears with another file but i dont have any other files of this game and ive uninstalled and re installed it and it wont work. Please help.
Great update~ ^^, gotta love me some jelly Almond~ ;) btw, Crow is soops hot .__.
I really like the codex :) I think xou did a really good job with contriving not just a cool universe that's rich in history, but xou made it realistic UwU
It's nice to lay out the story of the world xou created, right? n_n I mean, xou go through all this trouble building a fantastical world filled with divine beings, timelines, wars, and all that jazz to make the universe seem real and alive, but xou only get to explain a small portion of xour lore when focusing on the MC's life :) so I really enjoyed the codex :p
Omg yes! That's the reason I created it in the first place. Because there are so many little details that I want to mention and I can't do that in Eglly's story line
It's really nice :) I had to jot down an entire 10,000 year timeline for 1ne of my stories to help fit all the pieces of my universe together, so I can really appreciate the effort xou've put into xour codex UwU
I don't even know how to put it into words, because the game is a masterpiece! Interesting story and characters. I really like your game, I will look forward to the continuation of the novel!
i don't usually write comments (mostly because i am not very good at it, i am better reading) but i really liked this visual novel, specially the MC, i don't know if is because of how the story started or if i find his personality relatable to me but i felt like i cared for him and that is something that no other visual novels has made me feel for their MC. The rest is good too, the characters, story and everything but who surprised me the most was the MC.
Okay… There is too much to cover, and I’m surprised by the amount of content in this chapter. Like I said many times before, I will get into the story itself and work in some categories: Audio, Narration/writing, Art and finally eye candy. For this case since it still short I will only give an opinion, still I know it is a work from a single person with some support on other areas.
A full review will take every little thing in detail, and I’m not here for that at the moment. Done on Build: 0.04
Long story made short: I have enjoyed too much! I had a laugh that it was difficult to stop. I’m surprised by the detail and background details of each scene. Likewise, I had cried and feel the pain too. It is hard to explain, but that is sympathy at its fines. The story is well put together and viewed by our character. Some 4th wall breaking but not too extreme. Do I recommend anyone to give it a try? Absolutely, yes. ¨Don’t judge a book by its cover but by its content.¨ I was a fool now, so take it.
Audio: There is no problem so far, I say that many of them caught me by surprise by how well they fit their respective scenarios. I enjoy music and I feel their emotions if there is one… In this case, I had many more emotions been powered by the songs in their scenarios. Making them memorable.
Side note: While writing this review, I have been enjoying the starting menu song.
Narration/Writing: Although I have no right to judge for writhing since English is my second language. I have to say, it is easy to understand and fast to read. The descriptions are well put together and most of them fit wonderfully together. I enjoy a good story and this one did not disappoint to even seen the end of the chapter. True, I would love to see what comes next but, for now, I’m satiated for the dissolved.
The characters are a lovely bunch, and although there is some strong imagery on some of their actions, they do fit their world well. Talking about the world, I can say, even if their concept seems simple, it is still better if it is simple because it can get complicated really fast.
Their world is wonderful travel to the unknown. Knowing them, and hearing how they survive and live, are a good point to show how much is kept in mind.
Art: Now this one is a touchy theme to talk about. First, I like to say that I sometimes judge a project for its art, but, for this one, it really caught my eye. I know it is a one-person work, and I understand that judging art is almost an insult. I do not mean any harm here, I do love how they look and how charming it is on the style. Furthermore, I know they can be refined… but honestly I’m happy for it that it is a good-looking and thoughtful game. I have to give it credit, it may look out of place, but I do know that a previous judge of the art of a game got me into a hidden gem. This one is an example of why I should not judge by their art.
As for how did I view it before opening my mind? Honestly, some angles of the characters faces got me seen them a little weird. I understand it is because of perspective, that way we don’t see it bad. It did distract me sometimes, but never mind that.
Eye candy: Sadly, there is none at the moment. Now… by eye candy I mean the… Intimate kind… But it’s no problem at all. We are starting after all. I do love to see it, but I hate it when it is rushed and never build up to it. I have seen games that just run for it. While others go for a slow approach, and I enjoy more of those. I’m here to see a Visual Novel. For a different kind of reason, I believe it needs to be build slowly if I wanted something fast… there are other mediums for them.
With everything being said… This is all I can do for now. I hope I had given some advice and some good pointers to help and make a decision to try to enjoy the time free you may have to try this game. I will continue to update it through the builds, so thank you for reading, and thanks to the developer for creating a wonderful story.
I’m sorry I might not have any right to ask this, but… Is the first chapter completed right? and. How long does it take to finish reading? I want to keep this one under my watch, I have been reviewing and giving some opinions. I just want to know, since I do not know the state of the game at the moment. Since is pretty resent, I will be happy to know if it will be worth checking it out.
As for why I’m asking, it is because I have been stuck in some other VN´s that are keeping me on my toes every time there is something interesting. If it is worth it, I will give my time to see it.
In short: give me some indicators or recommend by knowing if it is good.
Well, Chapter one is 100% percent finished and it should take you around 2 or 3 hours to read the whole thing (Depends how much of a fast reader you are)
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It's true what they say: we all evolve into crabs eventually
That is the crab ending, coming soon XD
Now I actually want to see a joke ending where Ehlly screw up a spell so bad he turns the Canine kingdom into the Crab kingdom.
Ty for the update. Finding out Almond was using his magic for naughty during the bow training. XD
That wolf is always up to no good 😁
Played through the entire thing, and it was incredible! ikalis is best boy and no one can tell me otherwise.
You just earned 10 love points with your favourite nerd heheje
Damn the changes in the art is good.
PC?
Silly mistake! Try again, I already fixed it.
Sorry D:
The newest update will have all 3 routes updated correct?
Yep
Does he really have the heart of amethyst?
How tall is Ehlly compared to the three characters?
These are the Canon heights of my boys
Ehlly 5'6
Almond 6'2
Ikalis 6'5
Rodrick 6'7
Hope it helps!
I'm about Almond's height. Thanks for the info.
Bro, I'm like barely higher that Ehlly xd
6'7 😳
Really enjoyed the content already in it. Can’t wait for more updates !
The discord link says invalid or expired :(
There, changed it again hehe Hopefully this time I did it right so it won't expire again.
Sorry for the inconvenience D:
Its cool, discord is weird
I can't join the discord :
Here ya go buddy, try it out with this link
https://discord.gg/88ZBP7Y5
Thanks it worked :D
The page redesign is so cute!
Thank you Theta! I'm so glad you noticed it ;^3
Is this normal? When I was in Ehlly vs. Eddy fight, When I choose the "Get back on my feet" dialogue option, it says "an exception has occurred" for some reason.
This is the first time I hear about this. I'll look it up to see what could have go wrong.
Thank you for letting me know.
I really like this VN i cant wait for next update (i hope this Masterpiece was not abandoned) :>
Not planning on quiting any time soon ;^3
I followed thee steps on how to beat eddy but it still ended with me losing?
If you follow these steps and you trained with Rodrick the day before, you shouldn't lose in any circumstance.
- Block vertically.
- Block vertically.
- Block horizontally.
- Block vertically.
- Block vertically.
- Attack.
- Block vertically.
- Block vertically.
- Block horizontally.
- Dogde.
- Kick the sword!!! (Be quick about this one).
I hope it helps ^^
it was just a bug I reloaded the game and it worked ty ^^
My files are broken
Do i have to start from the beginning
Yes you do. But if you downloaded the last update there's a chapter's selection menu. So you won't have to read it all over again ^^
Wow an update
Sorry for the bothering, but There's a way to Win against Eddy? I tried everything but i can't figure out a way.
No bother at all! Besides, it's a little tricky so dont worry about asking.
So, first you need to make all the right choices. The order is:
- Block vertically.
- Block vertically.
- Block horizontally.
- Block vertically.
- Block vertically.
- Attack.
- Block vertically.
- Block vertically.
- Block horizontally.
- Dogde.
- Kick the sword!!! (Be quick about this one).
And there you have it, easy win against Eddy.
NOTE: Depending if you trained with Rodrick on the sea or not, the "Stand on my feet" option will change. So I recomend you to train with him.
It worked! Thanks for the help, I was so frustrated I couldn't BEAT this smug idiot
I love ALL the game,10/10, maybe some more romance(my personal taste), thanks again to create such beatiful game
Hehe ^^ You're welcome buddy.
And thanks for liking the game.
I just finished it. It's so amazing I love the characters almond, ikaris, zaddy rodrick I love this visual novel it deserves the love and support it gets and I hope this visual novel still gets update. Don't try to stress yourself🫶🫰🪷
Thank you so much for such kind words buddy!
I'm really glad you liked the VN ^^
I love Almond sooo muuuucchhh and this amazing vn <3<3!!!!!
Hehehe thank you so much ^^
Am I the only one that can't stand the Princess Dhalia that narcissist, stuck-up, elitist, self-centered, arrogant, umpleasant bitch? Not that her maid is much better if we're being honest... To be honest if they "disappeared" from the VN I would be happier not having to deal with them.
Thank you so much for reporting this. I'll look into it immediately.
You know for some reason I thought two of the guys had their routes starting I didn't think it was only the second guy so far anyway I have no problem it's just I was hoping to see what the black wolf would do with the main character on their first day together on top of that the second guy really give me whiplash because I don't remember the main character ever fully acting like that at all sorry for the long comment
That's fine! Any comments is welcome.
Thank you for playing.
I really wasn't expecting to have tone whiplash at all
OMG OMG OMG I so excited for the next update it. I'm literally going to die if it doesn't get an update just finished the storyline so I was just waiting for the update. (~'v'~)
Finally getting a chance to read since the 0.4 update, and I'm loving it! Just wanted to report a minor typo here that I found while re-reading:
There's a c instead of a q in the word consequence in the last line.
Thank you so much. Also, really glad you came back ;^3
Everytime i try download it says that it intafears with another file but i dont have any other files of this game and ive uninstalled and re installed it and it wont work. Please help.
Great update~ ^^, gotta love me some jelly Almond~ ;) btw, Crow is soops hot .__.
I really like the codex :) I think xou did a really good job with contriving not just a cool universe that's rich in history, but xou made it realistic UwU
It's nice to lay out the story of the world xou created, right? n_n I mean, xou go through all this trouble building a fantastical world filled with divine beings, timelines, wars, and all that jazz to make the universe seem real and alive, but xou only get to explain a small portion of xour lore when focusing on the MC's life :) so I really enjoyed the codex :p
Omg yes! That's the reason I created it in the first place. Because there are so many little details that I want to mention and I can't do that in Eglly's story line
It's really nice :) I had to jot down an entire 10,000 year timeline for 1ne of my stories to help fit all the pieces of my universe together, so I can really appreciate the effort xou've put into xour codex UwU
Omg I can't believe I'm thirsting over another character that probably tried to kill me, and will most likely do it again.
Why did you make 𝘩𝘪𝘮 that hot?!
Haha Well, I'm glad to see so many people thirsting over a bad guy XD
That's great as always I wait for the next update nwn
Small issue with the MAC version you can not load from saved files, keeps starting from the beginning after a error message.
Even after starting a new Save File? Please let me know if that's the case.
Same issue with the saved files on Windows version unfortunately
yeah. Since I redid part of the code, it'll throw error if you try to load your saved files. The only way to fix this is to start a new safe.
So sorry about this.
Alright i do that. Thanks for the reply btw.
You're welcome buddy
Unfortunately still have the same issue.
there is a typo in Almonds bow scene where he says bottoms instead of buttons but i think it should be left in as its funny
Who are the romance interests? Are there romantic routes?
There are 3 romantic routes. Their names are Ikalis, Almond and Rodrick ^
How along are those routes?
They're still in progress so I can't really answer.
Have the routes been implemented yet or are they still out of the playthrough for now?
Well, a little bit of both. The routes aren't fully implemented yet, but there are some choices to gain love points already.
I don't even know how to put it into words, because the game is a masterpiece! Interesting story and characters. I really like your game, I will look forward to the continuation of the novel!
i don't usually write comments (mostly because i am not very good at it, i am better reading) but i really liked this visual novel, specially the MC, i don't know if is because of how the story started or if i find his personality relatable to me but i felt like i cared for him and that is something that no other visual novels has made me feel for their MC. The rest is good too, the characters, story and everything but who surprised me the most was the MC.
I hope you finish this VN - Good Luck.
Thank you so much for your good wishes! I'm really glad you liked Ehlly ^^
Okay… There is too much to cover, and I’m surprised by the amount of content in this chapter. Like I said many times before, I will get into the story itself and work in some categories: Audio, Narration/writing, Art and finally eye candy. For this case since it still short I will only give an opinion, still I know it is a work from a single person with some support on other areas.
A full review will take every little thing in detail, and I’m not here for that at the moment. Done on Build: 0.04
Long story made short: I have enjoyed too much! I had a laugh that it was difficult to stop. I’m surprised by the detail and background details of each scene. Likewise, I had cried and feel the pain too. It is hard to explain, but that is sympathy at its fines. The story is well put together and viewed by our character. Some 4th wall breaking but not too extreme. Do I recommend anyone to give it a try? Absolutely, yes. ¨Don’t judge a book by its cover but by its content.¨ I was a fool now, so take it.
Audio: There is no problem so far, I say that many of them caught me by surprise by how well they fit their respective scenarios. I enjoy music and I feel their emotions if there is one… In this case, I had many more emotions been powered by the songs in their scenarios. Making them memorable.
Side note: While writing this review, I have been enjoying the starting menu song.
Narration/Writing: Although I have no right to judge for writhing since English is my second language. I have to say, it is easy to understand and fast to read. The descriptions are well put together and most of them fit wonderfully together. I enjoy a good story and this one did not disappoint to even seen the end of the chapter. True, I would love to see what comes next but, for now, I’m satiated for the dissolved.
The characters are a lovely bunch, and although there is some strong imagery on some of their actions, they do fit their world well. Talking about the world, I can say, even if their concept seems simple, it is still better if it is simple because it can get complicated really fast.
Their world is wonderful travel to the unknown. Knowing them, and hearing how they survive and live, are a good point to show how much is kept in mind.
Art: Now this one is a touchy theme to talk about. First, I like to say that I sometimes judge a project for its art, but, for this one, it really caught my eye. I know it is a one-person work, and I understand that judging art is almost an insult. I do not mean any harm here, I do love how they look and how charming it is on the style. Furthermore, I know they can be refined… but honestly I’m happy for it that it is a good-looking and thoughtful game. I have to give it credit, it may look out of place, but I do know that a previous judge of the art of a game got me into a hidden gem. This one is an example of why I should not judge by their art.
As for how did I view it before opening my mind? Honestly, some angles of the characters faces got me seen them a little weird. I understand it is because of perspective, that way we don’t see it bad. It did distract me sometimes, but never mind that.
Eye candy: Sadly, there is none at the moment. Now… by eye candy I mean the… Intimate kind… But it’s no problem at all. We are starting after all. I do love to see it, but I hate it when it is rushed and never build up to it. I have seen games that just run for it. While others go for a slow approach, and I enjoy more of those. I’m here to see a Visual Novel. For a different kind of reason, I believe it needs to be build slowly if I wanted something fast… there are other mediums for them.
With everything being said… This is all I can do for now. I hope I had given some advice and some good pointers to help and make a decision to try to enjoy the time free you may have to try this game. I will continue to update it through the builds, so thank you for reading, and thanks to the developer for creating a wonderful story.
I’m sorry I might not have any right to ask this, but… Is the first chapter completed right? and. How long does it take to finish reading? I want to keep this one under my watch, I have been reviewing and giving some opinions. I just want to know, since I do not know the state of the game at the moment. Since is pretty resent, I will be happy to know if it will be worth checking it out.
As for why I’m asking, it is because I have been stuck in some other VN´s that are keeping me on my toes every time there is something interesting. If it is worth it, I will give my time to see it.
In short: give me some indicators or recommend by knowing if it is good.
Hiya buddy.
Well, Chapter one is 100% percent finished and it should take you around 2 or 3 hours to read the whole thing (Depends how much of a fast reader you are)
Hopefully you'll end up liking it ^^
Alright, I will check it out. And thank you for answering, I will give my opinion soon enough.
How tall are the characters in ft? Mc, Ikalis, Almond and angry wolf knight
Ehlly is 5"4
Rodrick is 6"4
Almond is 5"11
Ikalis is 6"3
I'm new here and I loved the vn
I'm guessing the mc can use both elemental and physical mana since his eyes are a combination of blue and red aka purple
I'm glad you liked it! Welcome
Check out Home Zomewhere else, its good too. 🙂🙂
already played in and I loved it
The end of this update kinda hit close to home. Still great work!!! 😃😃😃